Very well done! Awesome job... It's amazing how some of these poems just feel like they were written just... for YOU! You know what I mean? Your poem got to me, made me think... Nice job...

i agree with bad kitty awesome poem 5/5 i hope to see more of your work its really good keep it up

Ty every1 for taking time to read voote and comment its really appercated .And ty kitty i will make the changes asap.

very well written, excellent! keep up the good work!

liked your poem very much... 5/5 on this!

wow that is an awsom poem, you did a great job. amazing stuff. i loved it, hope everything is alright with that boy. Much Love

nick

GREAT POEM LIKE!! aww soo good!!

Oh my God...thats awesome......love it...it's one of thosepoems that if you read fast it's reallly touching ..you know......

Magnicifent. Beautiful. Well done. a few things that come to mind.

It's very tuching:)

just one thing... try not to use the same words.. thats the only down point :) i'm liking it :)