The format of this poem is really interesting, haven't seen that before. I also liked how you repeated certain things for emphasis. Nicely done. Take Care.

-PG-

U go girl!! as i was reading ur poem i got more into it. "u got skillz girl, u got skillz"
& thank u 4 commenting on mine.

Wow that good!!

alot of emotion~

Wow, tht was so cool! and full of emotions, i dunno wot to say im speechless!
ura great poet, keep it up!
Becca x