Beautiful title! Beautiful poem! It's very mysterious (did i spell that right? :P) but that's why i LOVE IT! 5/5 Hey, sorry i didn't comment on your newest poems sooner, I've been over at a relative's house all weekend. But i'm back on P&Q!!! Never thought i'd miss it so much...:) Plus talkin to everyone....well, i'll catchya l8r, ~lil slam~ Take Care! Peace and Soooooooooooooooooooooo Much of Mah Luv <33333333333, //Ari\\

Hey just got all your comments, it's like 11 o clock haha...listen slow down! It's all right i was away for the weekend too, and everyone had so much stuff...take your time, ~lil slam~ it's all good! Thanx soooooo much for your comments! I aprecia-
Hey.
I'm at the top of your list?
COOL! lol
Luv Ya Sooooooooooooooooooooo Much lil slam. Peace and G'Nite! //ari\\

Fantastic poem, really enjoyed it, I think dark is the right category, it really kept me hooked, well done..
keep it up

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