When I first started to read this poem I was going to say it should go under friendship. As I read on I changed my mind. I think you made the right choice because you are writing about life. Anyways you showed a lot of true emotions. Very well expressed! Keep it up! Take Care! Brooke~

*i deff. dont get the freeflying*till im shot thing...lol but it was cory angelo i met him in Ohio lol........oh yeah 5/5

This was alright. I felt that the rhyme scheme, especially at the last stanza felt forced. Like I said before depression poems aren't my favorite. Keep writing!

this is really well written, I give it a five!

I like how you wrote it . It was really good .
Keep it up
April`

Excellent dedication.

Not your best but its still very very good!!! I liked how you went through the 1st part and named off your friends and what they mean to you! thats awesome! 5/5

once again, this was just..wow! it was amazing. its great you have such strong friends. 5/5 keep writing!

Well written, I know i've felt like this more than once...make's you very thankful to the ones who stick by you.

wow, you express your feelings wonderfully. You're really talented.
much love,
marjan

I can really relate to this part-
"i really love living
outside of my home
it ends my hearts aching
and I'm free to roam"
love your poem, and I hope things get better for you=)5/5
~Christina

i liked this poem. even tho it was a lil bit about depression it showed alot of emotion

wow..very heartfelt from beginning to the end. it was good. xxx

wow, great! 5/5!

Twas okay, rhyming was a it forced, but like I said before, it was heartfelt and had feeling. Write on!

that's a GREAT poem....it was really good.

Heartfelt poem, full of emotion and different feelings, the way it was written was interesting as well, flowed well, good poem.. good work

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Hmm...odd-so original. X

Nice rhyming....heartfelt, friends are so important. Lovely job with this poem.

xxx

Amazing work. Definatley from the heart. Keep up the great work!

<3Much Love<3
~*hAiLy*~