Breathing Out

by Kevin   Jun 19, 2005


Calm weekends in June
a warmth you can breathe
and it's ok to be alone
walking
or just in general
we all have warmth
for a friend today
distracting us in chatter
of degrees
treating us to the shade of trees

and still i miss you.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Breath of fresh air with beautiful sentiment

  • 19 years ago

    by chyenne

    Wow i reallt liekd this i envy yur tallent
    x x x
    chyenne
    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Lovely write, I was just thinking about something for summer and came across this. This is good inspiration for me.

    Best regards,

    Steve

  • 19 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    I can't tell if the person who commented before me was kidding or not... I didn't think rhyming was necessary for this poem, although you did rhyme trees and degrees at the end. I thought this poem was overwhelmingly peaceful. I felt like it was some sort of extended haiku, only more satisfying. The flowing change of syllables per line might have done it, or maybe it was just the topic. Hm. I think I'm going to go meditate or something now.

  • 19 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    The gentle breeze of summer along with being bitten by that love bug leaves any person feeling out of tune with the rest of the world.

    Short, sweet, and to the point, but very good. The reader can actually see the images running through their mind.

    --Sher

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