Today i am alone

by chris   Jun 19, 2005


Today i am alone
i wish someone genuinely cared
and actually heard me out as a person
not just passing judgments
today i am alone
cause the ones i thought cared don't
the few i thought were helping turned their backs
i wish they knew i needed them around
today i am alone
i no longer have the will to move forward
the heart to carry on
i no longer have control of the path i walk
today i am alone
and this is how i feel
i wish you would have just took two seconds to see
and actually wanted or cared to know why
today i am alone
cause the happiness i was finding
i found was a lie
i just don't get why you would do it to me
today i am alone
i am bear for the world to see
i have nothing left
so why cant you help me out and at least walk and talk with me
cause today i am alone

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  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    The feeling I get from this is...quiet and sad...even though quiet isn't a feeling but oh well...

    I, too, had a reaction of love, empathy, understanding, and relation as sweetenigma said...I didn't have a second thought like she did though...it just makes me think of so many people, all of which I want to reach out to...some unreachable... =(

    "and actually wanted or cared to know why"

    ^ I was thinking it might be good to change it to something as, "and actually wanted or bothered to know why" ...just for a little variation in wording.

    Keep writing ;)

    xxx

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