Look At Me

by CuRsed AnGEL   Jun 19, 2005


Look into my eyes tell me what you see
for am I your lover or your enemy
do you believe that the future is made for just you and me
For every time I look into your love stricken eyes
I wanna give a cry
for you and me to live ever happily with immortality
But look into my eyes for now all you can see is your true enemy
so I wish you can see that there is a second future with you and me
cause our love has immortality
cause our love is meant to be so lets let it go on a killing spree
making other loves look like a toy compared to ours
cause from afar it looks like we are each others enemy
but up close we can't get enough of one another
so I think this means where meant for each other
so look into my eyes tell me what you see
I hope you can only see you and me

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  • 19 years ago

    by Amy

    Good poem! i like your stuff!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Erin

    First i agress wit jennifer, but second the poem was great. and i encourage u to write more. one thing i think i should say is when u write the poem try to have every line have the same beat and rythm. but other then that its really great.

  • 19 years ago

    by jennifer

    Loving the enemy only makes it better

  • 19 years ago

    by Cynthia--Nasr

    Nice job again

  • 19 years ago

    by *cUrSeD lOvEr*

    Hey i have read this poem many times and now i think you should know that your love for her and her love for you is what every one wants, just like what you wanted for everyone to say that they want a relationship like yours, well now thats what every one says.LUCKY,GOSH

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