This a beautiful poem and I can really tell that your father means a lot to you. I will pray and hope for your father to get better and I really hope he does. If you want, you could check out my poems.

I hope your dad gets better!

Much love!

how sad i hope he gets better and that nothing terrible happens and if something does you can be brave i can tell by the poem that you wrote

hey great poem i luvd it i hop ur dad gets beta soon mah dad is sik aswell but i do not talk to him nd i dnt think i will but if u need sum1 to talk to u can talk to me at i_luv_kaitlyn_n_lleyton_4_life@hotmail.com

luv kiri xoxox

Wow this poem is really sweet I like it a lot. I give it a 5! Good Job. Will you please vote my poems thanks!

My heart goes out to you. It's truly a hard thing to deal with when it's one of your parents. I lost my Mom to cancer 8 yrs. ago, so I know what you are going through. Beautiful dedication filled with love with a very special Dad. Well done. I know he's proud to have you for a daughter. He will be in my thoughts and prayers and God Bless you and Your Family, He will give you strength!!!!!

hugs and love, Ann