i really love this poem!
nice job!

hun, check ur spelling (ther i sed it, coz i tend 2 4get..lol)
aww.. thats so sad.. i loved the title and how u used it in the poem.. "Take me away".. these words are so deep n touching.. i hope ur ok now.. things like that happen all the time :)..
keep up the gud work

:(((
You're very talented... you should write more.. All of these are last months!!! Keep on writing girl!

awesome... its sad that this is true for you but the poem radiates with talent!! great job, and keep ur head up, it gets better.. but if you're not happy there and they cant accept you as soon as you can make it possible, GET OUT!! thats what im having to do by the end of this summer... im 17, will be 18 in a lil over six months... but i cant stay here(with my family) anymore.. i cant do it for a lot of reasons... but if you EVER want to talk... and have aim, my sn is CuteLovePancake, IM me anytime you feel a need to talk!!!
keep at it, take care of you first!
amanda

this is a very good poem! you have alot of great skills! keep on the writing!5/5

leanna

Before I even read the side note, I thought about the pain I have and the fact that my parents act like they don't see my hurt. They act as if everything's okay, like they are ignoring the fact that their child is not okay....I can seriously relate with a lot of your poems, never stop writing!!! 5/5
~*Amber*~

That was a great poem its so wierd cuz i read ur profile and u seem like a happy gurl wit a perfect life but as soon as i read this it was like whoa nvm maybe she isnt so perfect.but i luv this poem i luv all ur poems they're all so good!! keep it up.take care

!~*_MiRaCle_*~!

Wow, very very well written! i can see why its a 5/5 all the way. it was perfect and so was the flow and the emotion. 5/5

Welcome to the hall of fame....which i call my faves...lol good job!

Wow, this poem was really touching...i cant relate to how you feel in this! you've done well
luv em

Great work, it was full of so much emotion.

Hey I really like this one. I can relate to it somewhat too. Keep writing!
~Miranda~

Your poem had a great flow and perfect word choice. I loved it and gave it a 5. Keep up the good work. And if you have the time it would be great if you can check out one of mine.

Excellent...this would also make a good song. Exquisite almost, keep it up.. I loved it

Wow i think this one is amazing
great writing it has such a great flow!!!

love always
tabby

Bloody sad, that was great, very good write right here, I hope that things with your family are better, I fight with my family alot aswell

I loved this poem. its so truthful and honest. you'd probably like mine, too. its called Take Me to the Place. feel free to check it and keep writing!

Amazing..better than the last..you are really good..5/5

keep it up
take care
shannon

I realy like this poem , it had a great flow to it . i agree with MY1&only , the end was brilliant !

Great poem. I really get how you feel. I gave it what it deserves..a 5..