This is amazing!! good job!! i love it!!

Omg, this is such a good poem, it mad me cry because it reminds me of myself, keep writing.

Hello again love! Wow, this poem got a great deal of votes and comments, lol. I thought you had amazing flow in this poem especially in the middle stanzas. I have to say I was a bit let down by the ending, only because the middle was so good that the last few stanzas really couldn't compare. This is not an insult my any means so I pray you don't take it that way. I can understand the fighting with the family, lol. I am the odd ball in the family so I get into a lot of arguements with them. Hugs love and nice write.

-Tainted Mikochan

5/5 I loved it! This poem id truely excelent! And i can't say my favourite line, 'cause i just loved the whole piece!
Keep it up =]

- natz x0x

Very well written
touching
sad
emotional
5/5
love
amy

Awesome write=) Excellent flow and I really like the structure you used. Im sure a lot of people could relate to this.. Im sorry that this is true but when you write from your experiences it helps you feel better, and in your case you've written something truely amazing also they mean alot more=).. amazing write ;)

--emotionless.19*

This is so sad, I hope things work out at home. There was so amazing imagery in there that made your sadness so accessible. Beautifully written.

Little thing: did you mean 'tears apart'
where it says "tares it apart"

[lostlaureate-come find me]

Wow.. i loved this poem.. its definitly my favorite out of the 7 i read.. great job 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen!~*

I like it.. really enjoyed reading this piece of work.. and i must say you are very talented. Keep writing.