Hey guys, let me know what you think. Good or bad. Thanks

NOW THIS IS EXCELLENT ! You really put some thought into this one, it seems . This poem is so captivating and well worded . I wish I could rate higher then a five for this one because you truly deserve it . If you keep writting them like this, I'll keep reading . 5/5

Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to reading more of you're work .

Hopefully You're new friend,
Letty