Behind closed doors

by Carrie   Jun 20, 2005


She sits in her room and cuts all night
But no one had a clue, everyone thought she was alright
No one knew what went on behind the closed door
They don't know how the girl wishes to live no more
They don't know how everyday people would tease her
And then how at night she'd come home and pull out that razor
She'd cut real deep
But no one has ever seen
Maybe it was cuz no one really cared
And that's why she feels like it'd be better if she wasn't there
Maybe she should just leave this world and say good-bye
Would anyone even notice if she would die?

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  • 18 years ago

    by sammy jo

    I think this is ok i think it needs more though, i am not trying to be mean at all but there is somthign missing

  • 18 years ago

    by Unforgiven Retniap doolb

    Sad poem but still good

  • 19 years ago

    by Jennifer

    This is a amazing poem. You are very talented. Be blessed.

  • 19 years ago

    by Carrie

    thanx for the suggestions.. i am gonna use "behind closed doors" it fits well i think for this poem

  • 19 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    Gr8 poem! 5/5
    As for the title, how bout "Bloody Tears Drop Silently"? lol i dunno...Peace! //ari\\