Aching Heart

by Angie   Jun 20, 2005


My heart is aching
It beats so loud
Slowly breaking
Like a thundering cloud

Everything shaking
My world is spinning
It's all confusing
I'm slowly breaking

Day by day
Piece by piece
Every minute as we speak

My heart is aching
Slowly breaking
Nothing matters
My heart is shattered

*This poem has great a deal of meaning to me....I know it may not be one of my best writes, but I wrote this to calm myself. Please rate and comment it would mean alot to me. Thanx! xoxo
© Angie K

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  • 18 years ago

    by A Christoffer

    I liked the motion of the this poem. it was very continual in its meaning. good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~~Lindsay Woods~~

    One of the best...

  • 19 years ago

    by April

    Very good poem. 5/5 keep up the good work.
    ~ApRiL

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