by Angie Jun 20, 2005
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
We're short; We're tall, |
by Jenni Marie
Another one that has so much meaning behind it. And another one of my favourites. I have no ciritsims at all. |
by Kaylee
Now this is a beautiful inspirational poem just by showing vividly how we're different and yet the same whether we want to see it or not. Organization is wonderful, word choice amazing, details, absolutely in depth. |
Only one thing about it I dislike.... The fact we are all the same, yet we hate eachother for the little things. |
by Ashli
This is really good! i also have a habit of making up poems as i'm walking down the hall, and that just makes you a better writer because you let the ideas hit you, and you don't sit and wait for them to come. nice job! 5/5 |
*agrees with all above* great poem 5/5 =) |