Your so talented! Your poems are SOO amazing! 5/5 LOVED IT! it was so beautiful...Keep it up you have a GIFT!!
*BECKY*

its pretty gud 4 somethin that pops into ur head at skul.. i loved ur lines.. i only think that maybe u shud not repeat the first stanza, but write something using the scheme but other words to make it umm a lil different and variable.. lol
well, okz.. thats all i gotta say 4 now
take care n keep it up

this sounds like somethings that have just popped out of me like you say this did for you... i really love it.. great job, this is what i know you're capable.. its a good enspiring poem! great job.. if you like these kinds of poems, check out some of my older ones... you might find you like them... like my poem entitled Life, its not as well put together as urs and its shorter... but its kinda good.. and Our Youth... thats more of a drealistic society poem.. but take a look
amanda

*agrees with all above* great poem 5/5 =)

This is really good! i also have a habit of making up poems as i'm walking down the hall, and that just makes you a better writer because you let the ideas hit you, and you don't sit and wait for them to come. nice job! 5/5

Only one thing about it I dislike.... The fact we are all the same, yet we hate eachother for the little things.

Now this is a beautiful inspirational poem just by showing vividly how we're different and yet the same whether we want to see it or not. Organization is wonderful, word choice amazing, details, absolutely in depth.

Another one that has so much meaning behind it. And another one of my favourites. I have no ciritsims at all.