My Friend

Great lines~

Then I found you like a fresh air,
I felt that you have that touch and you do care
You gave me the friendship that I need,
You came to my life as most precious gift

All your poems are amazing. You choose the best words and it has life into it. 5/5! I will follow your works, my friend. Keep on writting.

"You are such a good girl...
What happened to you?
You used to talk to me so nicely...
What changed you?
Thinking about you and what you've said,
What you gave to me I'll never forget."

Good rhyme scheme in this first stanza. Such honesty and innocence. I love it. This poem sounds so true. The flow is amazing. Your doing such a great job.

"Honestly, I don't believe that you are lost,
You are just hiding from me, tell me I am right or not..."

Favorite line in the poem, such hope and emotion.

"She gave a wry & said "I'm sorry"
She left my side & I closed my eyes,
I felt the pain but I did not cry..."

Good use of imagery, i like this. Your doing this in a lot of your poems. its perfect.

"Then I found you like a fresh air,"

Good contrast.

"You are such a wonderful person I don't want you to go
I know you a little and I want to know more
You are very precious, I need you in my sorrow & ecstasy,
Give back my friendship my friend and come back to me."

Such a sweet ending I like this poem. Reminds me of so many things, and I can relate and I'm sure many others can relate to this as well. Keep up the good work ;)

I liked this poem a lot mostly because of its theme as it's something I can relate to.
Well written poem. Keep up the good work.

A person can't be live without love, can't live without friends.
Friends are very important part of our life.

"Flowers has fragrance.
Thrones has stuck in,
still they are together
because they are friends for ever"

that was so sweet... If this is true then all you have to do is give this poem to your friend and she'll definetly come back to you... i can tell these words came right out of your heart..
lovely poem...