Hey its really sweet and cute i liked it

good poem... it seems like its a episode that has happend in your life. Seems a bit sad. Something likely has happend to me. And I think it happends to most of us, sometime in uor life. You cant always get the courage to tell a person about your feelings. Or do something whit your feelings, like giving he or she a call, just like a friend. But you cant do it. Maybe being afraid of being regeted. You write:

Still standing here in front of your door
shall i knock, or shall i call?

Liked your poem very much. Keep up the good work;)

hey hunni
i love the poem excellent keep writing .hope to read more soon.

Beautiful, heartfelt, love poem. Lovely flow...and it creates a picture for me... Well done.

xxx

AWW! That's soo adorable! How come there aren't any guys like you in America?

WOW for some reason, this one is my favorite! Awesome job... so much passion once again...

All the best,
Ana*

the petals of my rose
are falling off.
Thats so sweet for some reason it meant so much great work Kane and beautiful write keep it up plz comment and vote on some of mine

This poem is so cute, at all it has some special prince-with-a-rose magic , lol, maybe some kind of my romantic impression. ;-) But I like such profound writing with this bit of fairy-tale .

I hope to read more great poems like that from you .

Lots of love
Sabine

Thats great. i really love your style. keep it up x x x