by Vanessa Lea Jun 20, 2005
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
Tell me 'God loves everyone' |
by Lemma
As someone who has only recently begun to discover my faith (seriously, I only decided to get baptised last night haha) I completely understand where you're coming from. I ask myself this question all the time and there are a million things people will tell you such as, "how would we know true happiness without true despair?" But I still have difficulties with this whole issue. I think writing a poem about your beliefs is really difficult to do, especially when you feel as passionately as you do, mine always come out garbled and un-structured and generally don't make too much sense. Good job once again! |
by Brooke Amity
I love this poem |
Very heartfelt comments. I tend to sit on the fence with such arguments but expressed yourself well. The poem had great flow and did't lose tempo despite the length. I liked the use of capitals in 2 of the stanzas, it really came over as you shouting. |
by Jackie Marie
Right now, I am kind of iffy on the whole God thing. I def. agree with your piece. Where was he? I wrote a poem like this not too long ago. I didn't post it though. Good job.... |
by Natasha
Great job! I have been wondering the same. |