Our Friendship

by *heidi;   Jun 20, 2005


Here you are talking to me
we're best friends and always will be
we're together everyday
and i really like it that way
if i'm happy, you are too
i just wish i could tell you
how i really feel
the feeling you give me is so real
i want so badly to be your girlfriend
but do you want to be my boyfriend
if we ever got together
that would be the best day ever
but one thing i really want to say
is if we broke up,would it feel the same way
would we together still play a game
would it even feel the same
i love you as my best friend and would as a boyfriend
but i would DIE if our friendship were to unmend

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  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    I lov the ending. it made me think. u got alot of good points. the poem is very strong...5/5:)

  • 18 years ago

    by kiesha

    Sigh. I'm in the same situation right now with my guy friend. I want something more than a friendship, but like you said, I would die if I lost him. Ugh, it's so confusing! Hope things work out for you. Keep writing and take care.
    > Kiesha

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Great poem! I really liked it! Like someone mentioned before the rhythm is a little off in some of the lines but thats about it.

  • 19 years ago

    by ashley

    I love that poem it was good i feel ya on that

  • 19 years ago

    by Marcus

    I liked that one,that was good.

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