Wow! cant believe no1 els has comentd i realli like it! keep it up and check out sum of ma stuf! much luv Lxxx

Nice poem, slight slips in the rhythm, but other than that great job.

I feel like this too

That is such a great poem!!! I feel the same way about my best guy frend, keep writting u got some talent!!!
5/5.

Bbz im lovin it, its rele gd xxx

Hey i really like this one it's really good

I liked that one,that was good.

I love that poem it was good i feel ya on that

Great poem! I really liked it! Like someone mentioned before the rhythm is a little off in some of the lines but thats about it.

Sigh. I'm in the same situation right now with my guy friend. I want something more than a friendship, but like you said, I would die if I lost him. Ugh, it's so confusing! Hope things work out for you. Keep writing and take care.
> Kiesha

I lov the ending. it made me think. u got alot of good points. the poem is very strong...5/5:)