the poem had so much emtion it was like wow |
Thts reli deep well done x keep it up . plz comment and vote on some of mine |
by Just Lucy
that poem was so powerful, well done, i really loved the wording you did in the stanzas, keep it up and please always keep your head up, if this guy is cheating on you, he is the one that has the loss, he isnt worth your life sweety you always rememberthat ok!!! |
by Char
I can't believe people say "Great poem, so sorry... HEY can you come and comment about my poems?!"... some people just aren't very understanding and caring are they? Well I'm here for ya... I care about you more than you will ever know... Excellent poem (not like you ever write bad ones) Just remember, don't quit on me... |
by sad-taurus
Great poem! very deep.. i feel for you, sometimes i feel that way too, hang in there. 5/5 |
wow, that was really long. Great write though. Awesome job. <3 |
by Rachel
This is very sad and great. I love it. Can relate. Keep up the good work! |
honestly, i like the poem with rhyme but for this one is exceptional.. its really full of feeling, i even feel like im inside the story.. well done ^^ |
by DarkxBlood
hey good poem girl! keep it up and thanks for commenting on mine!! |
You Repeated Your Point Alot In This Poem, I Like That, For The Simple Fact That Many People Write Poems, And Can't Stick To The Topic,(But You Did a Awesome Job Of Sticking To Your Message) 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo |
by NannO
i like your poem... i especially lykd the convo with u n andy.. its reli touching.. keep working!! |