This was a really good poem..keep up the great work and thank you for commenting and voting on mine...5/5
*~*evans*lil*hottie*~*

Thanx 4 commenting on my poem, thought id take yours a look. Very nicoe i thought keep up the excellent work!!Some more poems will be coming soon,keeps ya eyes open

Hey..loved your poems!
thankz for your comment...
mwaahugzz!
take care!

Thanks for the comment! This poem was so amazing! You're so talented!

Thanks for the comment...this is a reaaly good poem.....take cares!

Great poem loved the syle..
love always tiffany heather

Thanks for the comment on my poem , this poem is great I really ilike it very good wording use

Great job, sweetheart! it was a wonderful piece of work! you have amazing talent, keep it up!! =D

**5/5**
**lolli**

U are so talented!! omg!!

You have a very unique style, I like! Keep on like this! And thanks for commenting! I really appreciate it!

You have a very unique style, I like! Keep on like this! And thanks for commenting! I really appreciate it!

This is just amazing
but I have just a small criticism
repeating the rhyme more than 2 lines doesnt seem so nice
try to write the whole poem as the last 3 lines..check out others poems and you'll get the chance to improve ur way in writing :). and just dont focus on the rhyme that much :)
good luck xxx