Comments : Shattering Rain

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    My god.. that was fantastic.. it made me just want to cry.. wow... well done.. it was just amazing... that writing camp sounds good..
    well done

    take care

    xxxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    Omg that's so tragic. Still awesome though! U described your fear and innocent emotions over this accident so clearly. 5/5 I hope you are ok hun. Plz take care ~lil slam~ Luv Alwayz and Forever as well as those Tight Hugs :) Peace, //ari\\

    P.s.- Hey writing camp sounds fun...kewl

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Great poem 5/5...can't wait to hear about writing camp!