awesome job. This is so evil I like it. Very well written. <3

Oops, sorry about the above comment. I accidentally pressed enter. (Just press complain and it will go away soon) But like I was going to say, I really liked this poem. It was dark and I loved how it didn't have a set structure. It made it unique. Great idea and nicely written. You might like one of my more recent poems...it's entitled "Distorted Fairy Tale", I must warn you--it is dark. lol well keep it up!

~rolo