Aw, this was cute! I liked this one. Short and sweet. (",)

~Krissy

Neat, Sweet, and to the point..

Awww for such a short poem, its really good! you didnt try to cram too much into it, thats good! There could have been a stronger word-choice, more vivid words that apply to the senses...The ending was so cute and the whole idea of the poem was just...cute. Even though not all the words rhyme, it still has a good flow and i loved how you rhyme the last lines because it made it a better ending all together! good job!
-kayla