Hmm...this poem isnt really detailed but you should get on that :P your a good writer all together, keep it up X3

This is good...this is kinda sad to...5/5

Typos
site=>sight
unsted=> instead

interesting poem. i feel the emotion behind it. my friend did the same thing.

Good jobb =] This is really good. Quite sad though.
Thanks for the comments btw.

Wow, i know you wrote this poem a few years back, but hey i like it i can relate to your poem, not everyone stays the same, i went through that myself, listen friends are not disposable, you miss the real friend in, her. she is not the same when she is another person.. thank you for commenting my poem of me and billy the kid never got along, that was funny, i read your poems.