YOU

by brittany   Jun 20, 2005


As I sit in my room crying I hold a glass in one hand and your picture
In another I look at your picture and I start to bring the glass to lips.
The lips that used to be kissed oh so gently by your soft lips. I know what
Im about to do is wrong. Then the glass slips from my hand and it shatters into a thousand Pease’s just like my heart. As I think about all that we had. All that we shared. How could you do this to me? I thought that we had something. But I guess I was wrong. In the end you turned out just like the rest. You used me to get what you wanted and then you tossed me aside like all we had and shard was nothing. And now all I can cry and cry. I feel so empty in side like I can go on. I want this pain inside to stop. But the only thing that can make this pain stop is to have you back in my life. But I know that will never happen. B/c you have moved on. And forgotten all we had. And now as I look up and one last tear falls I drop your picture and go out side to start a new day.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    So sad and emotional. As Anglea has pointed out, the ending is very positive and hopeful. Wonderful write!

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    What an excellent write Brittany... very heartfelt and emotional.... and so positive in the end......

  • 19 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    So much miss.

  • 19 years ago

    by DAYLON

    One thing I notice people on here are not really helping one another with critism. I notice in this poetry, as I do it myself. Grammar could be a little stronger, your later work shows you improved with it, but this shows a little mistakes. Do you proof read? Or somebodyelse? I use so much emotion sometimes I tend to write like this, To walk the dog over, then he decided to.
    As you will notice walked over what, he decide to what? to to walk over the bridge, then he decided to chase rabbit. Which is stronger and people get the fuller picture of what us poets trying to right. Have I been helpful or a pain in the ***. Us poets need to stay together.

  • 19 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Keep up the good work. Will read some more of your poems soon. You have major talent.

    Steve

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