by Alissa
wow...that was amazing |
by Andrea
great poem! |
by XKt_ShellyX
great poem - 5/5 |
This poem made me cry, I relate so much and it's a bit scary!!! I hope that you are ok??? Please don't go.....Stay strong!!! Love this poem, very emotional and sad.... |
by Anna
this poem is brilliant, it doesn't seem not finished at all |
this is really sad! but it's a g8 poem i keep a diary 2 lol |
by †JustAriâ€
gr8 poem hun!!! 5/5 |
This was a really great poem. It had a lot of feeling in it. Please don't hurt yourself. I hope you're okay. (",) |
by Hayley
i relate t9o your poem a lot. it had a lot of emotions and feelings put into it. and its really really good. actually its great. i know that you think that no one knows your cutting ,but chances are they probably do. they just dont know what to do. my friends all knew i cut. they just didnt know what to say to me. my mom found out and all she said was why...now she says i'm strong cuz i havent cut, but i've learned to cut on places that she wont ever see. but if you cut on your wrists and legs.chances are people know. and i hope you can quit i'm sorry this is so long. just hang on. hugs-hayley |
i don't know how some1 can write this good :( very well done, i wish i could write the same kinda way. take a luk at some of my poems please,vote and comment, and if they suck please tell me ways i can make them better xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo |
Wow its very relatable ur a good writer keep it up plz comment and vote on some of mine |
by Princess09
great work u hit the spot 5/5 nvr stop writin ur wonderful n one of my favs now lol |
by JL
omg! this poem is so powerful and well written 5/5 for sure |
by Sarah Ann
excellent poem. |
by *NiCoLe*
wow...this poem is great 5/5 thanks for your comment, it meant alot. |
by _
really cute! |
by Greta Miller
That was so sad, but it was a very good poem! keep up the good work, I hope your ok.check out some more of my poems if you wanna! byZ |
by holly
first off thank you for your comments on my poem they mean so much.. anyways this poem holds so much emotion you did a very amazing job and you really know how to write great job expressing your feelings i understand everyword of what you wrote |
I felt the same way after i couldnt ell anyone what happen to me with my father. it's good how i can relate to my peers threw poetry. |
by AhmadAfaneh
WoW!!! nice poem. it seems like i need a rele long time to reach this perfect level of writing. |