great poem!!

5.5

love and hugs

Nice write. It seemed that the thought was hanging. You should have a more concluding ending. But the poem was well-rhymed so it deserves a 5.

I absolutley loved it. So much depth. I give it a 5.

Keep writing!

DiStUrBeD_sOuL

I absolutley loved it. So much depth. I give it a 5.

Keep writing!

DiStUrBeD_sOuL

I absolutley loved it. So much depth. I give it a 5.

Keep writing!

DiStUrBeD_sOuL

I absolutley loved it. So much depth. I give it a 5.

Keep writing!

DiStUrBeD_sOuL

I absolutley loved it. So much depth. I give it a 5.

Keep writing!

DiStUrBeD_sOuL

IT S4DD TH4T P33PL3 STILL D0 THIS KINN4 STUFF!! R34LLY G00D!

You are a really good poet.
I really respect anyone who can ryme, and make it sound natural which you tottaly did. Good vary of words too,
keep up the good work

very nice.comment my poems if ya hav time.steph