by EJ Jun 21, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Sorry its so long.. i just got the feeling to write and thats what came out.. tell me if its good or not please!! thanks.. |
by Avellana
I can really relte to this poem. loves it. |
by Hans Fausto
although it seems kinda cluttered...ur poem shows alot of emotion...i like that..hehe.. |
I'm glad you at least don't want to end it...I wish you didn't feel the need to ease your pain with a different form of pain...but I guess you don't want me to say I'm sorry or tell you to stop cutting... You put your feelings out there and really let it all out...I like the ending, I agree... all the stuff before the drinking...that was sorta hard for me to take...it probably would've flowed better if I hadn't kept looking away and all....well good work...... |
by Kendall
i feel what you mean. amazing poem. |
if Iwouldnt have a thing agenst alcohol I wouldnt have gotten the last part! I love this poem, you have know Idea how much I can relate. Your brought tear to me eyes. wonderful write, powerful. |