Nobody Cares

by Melanie   Jun 21, 2005


My mom hates me
My dad doesn't care
The pain inside me
Is to much to bare
Sometimes i feel to die
Would end all the pain
Even though for others
Their lives would stay the same
But maybe i am wrong
Maybe some things would change
What if my mom became happy
What if i am to blame
One can only wonder
What if i were died
What if a tear had never been shed
Not a drop of blood ever bled
At least all my problems would end
It really doesn't matter
Since i have not one friend
I don't think people would notice
If my life were to end

Please comment i want to know what people i dont know think of my poem!

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  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    I'm sorry you feel/felt that way. Keep expressing yourself through writing. Your work shows potential, keep the emotions honest.

    "Is to much to bare" - *too (much)
    I know many can relate...I hope you do know that there are people who would care. Don't think otherwise, don't give up.

    Take care.

    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Clarissa

    It was a sad poem, but thats what poems can be because you need to get those feelings out, feel better and keep writing.

    Clαяissα ♥

  • 19 years ago

    by M MEM

    Amazing poem, i have been there....

  • 19 years ago

    by xXxIf You Only KnewxXx

    this is a really good poem...but dont give up, ever. if you need someone to talk to i can totally help. i'm working on quitting cutting right now and i would love to try to help you. guardfaerie09@yahoo.com
    love always,
    hamster

  • 19 years ago

    by Rachel

    I feel the same way. Great poem

    Rachel Morgan

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