nicely done, my fav part "Now I put the gun to my head.The floor starts to turn a blood red." I think that was very creative, keep it up! 5/5

well written good poem

WOW! your a really good writer...this poem is really really good...5/5

I really liked this one. awesome poem.
wish you the best,
marjan

*begins to tear up*

strong, true emotion. amazing. i can relate in my own little way.

"Let me live lives doom."

I'm wondering if you meant: "Let me live life's doom." Otherwise...perfect.

xxx

The title throws me off, and the second stanza seems a little forced. It is a courious way to talk of death...

~Breeze

I liked this one a lot too...i can totally relate...nice job 5/5 hehe i have a poem with the same title...:) anyways nice job...I enjoyed reading all your poems....luv yas mwah

-kayla-

I liked how there was two sides to this poem, it is a different way of writing.

Wow i i didnt get who you were tal;kn abotu till the end..God rigght?? love the way you approached this poem..it was sooooo amazinggggggggg.

LIS