by Dorotea© Jun 21, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
first love
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by Patrik
Hmm, well.. It was a well written, cute and beautiful poem and it feelt as it there was alot of emotions put in to it. But, I also feelt that it started out with "new english", but torwards the end there was a bit of "older english" words. Didn't like that personally, feelt as if it didn't work together. But overall it was a good poem:) |
Wow This Kind Of Poem Just Leaves You Speechless...This Was Beautiful...Great Descriptive Metaphors...Sounded Like Something Very Perfessional 5/5 Definatley xoxo-Nikki-xoxo |
by Libby M
This is truly a beautiful poem, I thought it sounded much Like Shakespear.. Well done. |
by Shædow Poet
Oh... gorgeous. I loved the old language feel- gave it a more pure love, a beauty that can hardly be found in love poems these days. I loved the description, the imagery. I felt serene reading this piece. |
by Forever29
Excellent flow & GREAT description! 5. |