My heart is under siege!

by Kane Burden   Jun 21, 2005


Why do i sink, when i wish to float,
and it all happened when i wrote.
When i wrote those stupid words to you,
that instead or rejecting,
brought me closer to you.
This was not how things were meant to be,
i never wanted to go out with you,
but now I'm trapped in this sticky situation,
unable to break free.
Ive fallen for your sister instead,
we just seemed to click,
and I'm hoping for the impossible,
but this situation is making me sick!
You broke up with your boyfriend,
to be with me,
which left me shocked,
at the highest degree!!!
So now I'm stuck here in the dark,
buried in sorrow,
leaving a scar.
I'm living a nightmare,
i cant just leave,
because if id did,
would be portrayed as a pig.
Must keep my feelings locked up inside,
and just pretend I'm high up in the skies.
Wish i could be floating in the breeze,
but instead I'm left here to freeze.
have so much love to give,
but none for you,
will have to stay though,
and remain faithfull to you...

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  • 19 years ago

    by Torn

    That was great...very sticky situation. although i admire you for being a 'gentleman', you shouldn't have to stay with her if your heart's not in it!!
    take care
    >anna x x x

  • 19 years ago

    by Sabine Taylor

    The story behind the poem is bodacious though it's so sad and painful for all. I can only hope that this is a result of your writing talent instead of a true story of yours. ;-)
    Keep it up ...

    Sabine :-)

  • 19 years ago

    by Ana Vidovic

    Awesome poem, but if this is a true situation, id reccomend that you tell the girl you havent fallen in love with the truth, however hard that may be, because you can't live a lie forever... in the end you both just get hurt and trying to keep her feelings from collapsing is good-hearted but maybe not the best way to handle it. Anywayz sorry to get into it, none of my business lol,

    Ana*

  • 19 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    I think this is great! It's so rare to find a guy who actually cares about portraying himself as a pig! Great write! I would love it if you'd check out some of my poems! Thanks so much! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by stephyG

    This poem is very heartfelt, and I can feel every word in every line, it gave me chills, excellent writing!
    please chek out my newest poem "help me" stephy :):)

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