i know how it feeels the same situation happen to me once but then again it was over guys instead lol well it was great

You're rhyming schemes seem to work...interesting little dilemma you have there in the poem... Nice work :)

xxx

you didn't seem to lose the topic just to find rhyming words!! great job!!

This poem is very heartfelt, and I can feel every word in every line, it gave me chills, excellent writing!
please chek out my newest poem "help me" stephy :):)

I think this is great! It's so rare to find a guy who actually cares about portraying himself as a pig! Great write! I would love it if you'd check out some of my poems! Thanks so much! 5/5

Awesome poem, but if this is a true situation, id reccomend that you tell the girl you havent fallen in love with the truth, however hard that may be, because you can't live a lie forever... in the end you both just get hurt and trying to keep her feelings from collapsing is good-hearted but maybe not the best way to handle it. Anywayz sorry to get into it, none of my business lol,

Ana*

The story behind the poem is bodacious though it's so sad and painful for all. I can only hope that this is a result of your writing talent instead of a true story of yours. ;-)
Keep it up ...

Sabine :-)

That was great...very sticky situation. although i admire you for being a 'gentleman', you shouldn't have to stay with her if your heart's not in it!!
take care
>anna x x x