Hey, I like the whole acrostic idea. Good job. Thanks for the comment. This has a very nice flow, keep it up.

Nice one this poem is so tru Nothing seemed to block the sad thoughts inside my head
that line is especially tru nice 5/5

This is good.

well done

Wow i have written acrostics before but none that even come close to sizing up to the greatness of this one. THis poem is just truly amazing. I am rather jealous of your talent, as i find myself being ever so foten on this site.

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Wow brilliant poem. flows really well, i love the Acrostic style, and this is a great one.
♥ Polly ♥