by MelindaJoy Jun 21, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Standing on the bridge overlooking the falls |
wow... that's all I can say to describe it. That's a really good poem... |
by Robin
Wow... I am completely blown away by that poem. |
by Ryko
I like it, its very well contructed and I have used the same rhythm and rhyme scheme many times...I'm also very relieved that you ended it with a happy ending rather than death or darkness, because I believe everyone's life has a meaning and everyone has dreams that should be fulfilled. thank you for ending it happy :-) |
by Marjan
hey, this is so beautifully wirtten. you |