hey, this is so beautifully wirtten. you
express your feelings sooo wonderfully.
and thank you soooo much for your
comment. much love, Marjan

I like it, its very well contructed and I have used the same rhythm and rhyme scheme many times...I'm also very relieved that you ended it with a happy ending rather than death or darkness, because I believe everyone's life has a meaning and everyone has dreams that should be fulfilled. thank you for ending it happy :-)
Awesome poem

Wow... I am completely blown away by that poem.
That was.. just... amazing. There's a million other things to say about it, but , WOW!
1000 out of 5 from me.....
Did that happen to anybody you knew? Or did you put those words together out of imagination?
Either way, everything went perfectly and it was a breathtaking poem.
Great job, and thanks for commenting on my poem.
Just wish I could write something like this!!
Xox,
Robin

wow... that's all I can say to describe it. That's a really good poem...