Very good poem! I loved the description you used. Keep up the great work, and thanks so much for commenting/voting mine!:D

Much love,
Ana*

This is one of my favs!! Good Job keep it up.

man this is real deep real intense i loved it

Aww this is so sad if you ever need to talk i will talk to you i have been wanting to die for a while but im living for everyone else.
missy xoxox

Awww. sad. i like it though. its good!

This is very emotional. It's great. Good job.