by Emily Jun 21, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Dear Dad, three years since you left, |
by Katelyn
great job!! keep it up i love it |
by Natalie84
Maybe not true but the way so many kids feel. I've felt this way since I was 6. I hated his guts for leaving but missed him with all my heart. I think of him everyday and miss him still. Funny how one can never experience such a thing but can write it better than one who did... :) Another excellent write. Boy I'll tell you you got some talent...I'll be watching for you...lol Nicely done!! 5/5 :) |
by Sarah Ann
glad it is fictional. my friend's father made her life a living hell. this poem was really nice...very emotional .xxx |
by †JustAriâ€
you had me there for a minute....very creative! 5/5 Peace! //ari\\ |