omg that was definately worth the reading! i loved it so much emotion and very well put i felt like crying just reading it and then once i read that you relate to all of it, makes me want to cry even more! so said wonderfully writen. you did an excellent job! definately worth the reading and time!!!!! hope everything is ok.

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

I got their new cd too.. and that's my favorite song also.. haha.. anyways.. great poem. I love it. 5/5

I got their new cd too.. and that's my favorite song also.. haha.. anyways.. great poem. I love it. 5/5

This is very sad sweetie. I wish these peoples situations were alot better than what they are.

xx
- Luvvo,
[Kal]

definitely worth reading im loving your work...
lots of love
xoxoxox

it was a great poem- excellent and nicely written a lot of people can relate to this poem

u r really talented keep up all ur writing 5/5

Worth a read heck ya, other that a few typos you did great.

this is brilliant!! yes it was worth the read!! 5/5 again xxx

It was an ok poem, just alot of jumping around topic to topic, nonetheless wasn't bad.

Very worth the read! i enjoyed this, every one was a different idea, i was expecting it to be on graduation, but it was great job and very creative! keep it up! 5/5

greatness loved it n its cool cuz like says what u wouldnt really think about but i do n didnt no if ne 1 else did either great work 5/5

i loved it!! you did a wonderful job!! its defenitely(sp) worth the read~!

Hey,
This poem was AWESOME!!! And hell yeah it was worth the read. I LOVED IT!!! And thanxs for commenting on my poem More About ME. I really appreciate it. You should chack out my poem I'm ME. More ABout Me was like a sequel to I'm me. THANX AGAIN!!!
~alexis~

twas worth the read. you worked well on it. you should be proud of it. I know a lot of situations like in your stanza's it must be terrifying to know every single one o.O keep writing
~*Freak*~

yes it was well worth the read these are very important thought provoking questions and the poem had a nice free flow 5

Glad to hear your doing good, i am doing good too, going to bed soon though, tired! can't wait to hear your new song, ya i've been like constantly working on something like i've started a short stroy (slowly in the making! not even close to being done!) and then i have this columbine poem i'm working on but i am doing a lot of research on it because i want it to have facts of the real day and i'm dedicating it too everyone in it and stuff. it's really sad event.

~PLP~ lil slam~ hugs and love~

i love it and it is really good and a must be read poem!!

-Josiah

WOW thas great i loved it. thx for the commit bye the way

wow what a long poem! but its worth the reading!! =) 25/5 i like it!