im so sorry about that... that happened to me too, we weren't friends for long, but it still hurt alot.. i couldnt imagine how hard that must b.. hope everythings ok.

and what r u talking about?!?! ur a great writer!! keep writing!

that is tragic indeed...i love the poem. your writing is too great. from the one i've read :)

xxx

Full of emotion! Very well written and also very sad. Good message in the poem too. You have a talent to write! Keep posting! ~Brooke~

sad but well written

Hopefully it's not about anyone you know.

The only suggestion I would make... (One that I seem to make a lot now)...would be to erase all the commas and periods you have the end of the sentence. They really aren't necessary and can sometimes take away from the flow.

Other than that I'd say it's a very nice write. Though it's a bit sad it's full of emotion. :)

very well written, great job! 5/5!

that muxtas been hard for you, or whoever its about lol but good work once again!

This was so sad. But written beautifully

Thats soo sad. I promised myself I'll never do drugs, and I have all the friends I need without a gang.

nice job! keep it up....maybe you could include something about the drugs and the gang somewhere in the poem, instead of mentioning it after? otherwise sad and well written! good job!

omg, that was so sad! *pouts* 5/5 im so sorry if that was true

This is really good. Im sorry for your loss. The scheme kind of lost itself in a couple of places but, still nothing to worry about. Amazing
Love Always
Allison

5/5... excellent

awww your poems are so sad. but really good.

aww that is also sad, i hope this isnt true, TELL ME IT ISNT TRUE lol, jks but if it is true, i am so sorry!!!!

such a sad poem, i hope it didnt happen to you? anyway great poem, nice work!

omg great work really loved it.. well done mwahz!! ur so talenteed.. please check out my newest poem "help me" n tell me wat u fink stephy :):)

5/5 well written

aww thats sad!

OMG! This is sooo sad. I'm sorry this happened to you! Great write though!

<3Much Love<3
~*hAiLy*~