by Ashleigh Skye Jun 21, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
first love
I wrote this poem for a friend of mine.. he gave me the idea |
by .
good poem 5/5 |
by Sami
i've given you a 5, very unique with your characters, but the storyline is perfectly clear... and too often very true. keep it up, look forward to reading more of your work. xox |
great poem nice the way u set it up it was like a daydream but yet so real |
by karma
your poem made my heart feel everthing you meant in it i think u did a great job |