by Kayla Sonya Dearing Jun 21, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
She woke up from her deep sleep |
by Charlotte
I like yor idea in this poem a lot. The mood is nice as well. But if I might make a suggestion, you might try putting an even amount of sylables (sp) in each verse. Just a suggestin. I still really like it! |