i love how you used the repetitive "how can you..." it adds somethign to the poem its very good keep writing

please read soe of my poesma dn give me some feed back thanxe

excellent poem lucy!

5.5

love and hugs

how do i write a comment to explain how cool this poem is? you made a poem completely out of questions and made it work! *snaps* awsome very deep and i can deff relate! excellent poem
>>5/5<<
*bec* xXx

sarah, i think you have pressed the comment button a little too many times, lol, but thanks everyone for the comments it means alot to me
Luv Always
*Lucy*