great poem! i love it! sad and dark..beautiful word imagery! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

Ah, dark. My favourite category, if it wasn't obvious already. Once again, an incredibly well written piece. It was probably because this was a dark poem, but I did enjoy this much better than unspoken words. Always, though, I find this is because of my, shall we say, prejudice, towards dark poems. I have favoured them, even obsessively. So it has nothing to do with your style of writing unspoken words, but I did find this better suited my taste. A job very well done.

tru, tru, tru... v dark poem.. second favorite, next 2 sad.. enjoyed reading it.. i also lykd ur rhyme
keep up the gud work
nouna

Sometimes it did seem forced somewhere along the middle but the overall image that had the dark sound...or flow was really cool. And it was great. Some great lines in it that add to the dark/sadness of it.
~Faith

I love it !
Very powerful
And its something i can understand
Good image to it
5/5
x

A poem i can relate to. it touched my soul. good work