Great Success

by Jacklyn   Jun 22, 2005


Today I,
Ate an apple over chips,
Walked in stead of a taxi cab,
Donated my taxi money to the needy,
Went to the park to pick up litter,
Washed my hands before I ate,
Said a prayer or two,
And counted to one hundred and fifty- two,
I drank water over root beer,
Walked the cross walk when I was suppose to,
I rode my bike around the block,
Ate a salad instead of greasy fries,
Calmly my mom and listened to her cry,
Visited Grandpa at the hospital,
Bought him balloons that said get well,
Read to children who had cancer,
Walked an old lady across the street,
Refused the two bucks she offered me,
It was a great success today,
So serious congratulations,
Do my victory dance with extra brownie points.

~i don't know, i just put it in inspriational poems because maybe this will encourage someone to make easier better choices, they do add up in the end, make you feel better too. also i put it in this section because i'm not sure where else it will go! please vote and comment, made at writing camp~

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  • 19 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    i quote, from the FIRST time u reopened the case: "Length doesn't matter missy!"-Jacklyn
    Mwahahahahahahahaha!
    I Wish U Peace N Happiness N Lotsa Luv From the Tips of My Toes Up (LOL)
    //ari\\

  • 19 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    (7:26 AM)

    *YAWN* Your new case means NOTHING to me! *opens your newest case and this is what it reads* U GOT MORE AWARDS THAN ME THT U CAN'T ARGUE ABOUT SO HAH! *notice tht your words are scratched out* Mwahahahahahahaha! I opened one one new case, one old one and gave a solution at the same time for both of them.....mwahahahahaha
    Peace and Luv Always ~lil slam~, //ari\\

    P.s.- U put up very good arguements, i'd h8 2 C u really have a go at someone lol but then again i'd like to c sum1 run really really fast....:P

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Great poem. I loved the whole theme.... 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    omg i reallyy liked this! you're right it can motiv8 sum1 to make better choices for themselves and others cuz in the end it just makes u feel a lil better bout yourself. I give it a 5! Peace Lotsa Luv Always ~lil slam~ //ari\\

    P.s.- I think a lotta women'll rel8 too! lol thanx 4 the comment! ALWAYS luv hearin from u :)

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