Comments : The Daily Birth And Death Of The Sun

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    I really liked the ending you chose for this poem! A creative way of looking at nature! You use great imagination when you write! ~Brooke~

  • 19 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    Nice poem!

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    I don't normally like nature poems...but this was an exception. Beautiful imagery...I love it...

  • 19 years ago

    by Kymberly

    Awsome poem! =D

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    Good poem. you write really good

  • 19 years ago

    by Kayla

    I liked this one too but not as much as the others....nice job though...luv yas mwah

    -kayla-