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by Amy Jo Jun 22, 2005 category : Love, romance / desired love
Dug below a vicious water In the depths of a dark hell Was Captain Lee's only daughter Trapped for life in a unholy well With long brown hair And big, dark eyes Couldn't escape or even dare Never once did she see blue skies Whenever her father was out Struggling to go find her mate But can't find a way, but to pout will this grave be her fate? One day the Captain fell ill And she's beckoned to his side To end his pain, a poisonous pill She acts to have cried Finally she's free Her love was waiting No more misery The began dating Away onto a boat Together forever Love does float And captain Lee never.... more
by Kane Burden
good poem, nice use of metaphors.. keep up the good work!