oh... wow. i really liked it!! however, coming from you, its pretty scary to be honest with ya. do we need to talk? cause i dont want you doing that to yourself, i know where it leads and i dont want you to be like me. please, leah, if there are problems on your mind, talk and try to resolve them, please... i really did like it though, loved the vocab and the style. |
by lunachan
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by eternal rest
oh... i like that. the way you ended it was cool... it was like, i want to bleed, i need to bleed.. cause im dead.. "I dont want it, i just need it, to feel, to breathe, to know that im alive" (lyrics from tool) thats what this poem makes me think of. another great one! |